Tuesday 6 November 2018

100 Word Challenge: Week: 4:


Week: 4: The Door:

The door appeared out of nowhere as I walked towards the exit of the haunted house. I wondered what was behind the door... So I crept towards it slowly. As I got nearer, it glowed with white light. I ignored the skeletons disappearing into the mist. As I opened the door, the white got brighter and brighter until it surrounded me. When I finally opened my stunned eyes, to my surprise, I was outside of the haunted house, back in the fairgrounds. I decided to walk back home. But when I opened the door the white surrounded me once again.
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2 comments:

  1. Lentil9912 November 2018 at 14:05

    Hi Poen,
    Well done on your 100WC, what an intriguing piece of writing. I am always amazed that people will go anywhere near haunted houses, I would be far too scared!
    I really like the interesting language you used like, crept, glowed, stunned and surrounded. They made your piece read in a sophisticated way.
    Keep up the great work,
    Ciara (Team 100)
    Wicklow, Ireland

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  2. jarjar18 November 2018 at 12:49

    Hi Poen,
    I like the cliffhanger at the end and I think it was very intriguing

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